-Music doesn't fit at all, ruins the immersion.
-No sfx, not needed but would make it more entertaining/help immersion
-Characters were hard to follow
-No real build up, this also was a main cause for characters to be confusing
-Unrealistic feel. They seem to be pretty calm for such a horrific situation
The concept is great but the execution was done poorly.
I would like to see another go at this if those issues were fixed, much potential to be found here.